For a dialogue piece this The skitters became scratches—Xander could hear the creature’s nails digging into the table over his head and the tail that swung briefly into view was larger than it had been seconds before. is an amazing bit of show don't tell description! Perfect voices too!
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Date: 2006-09-22 01:06 am (UTC)For a dialogue piece this The skitters became scratches—Xander could hear the creature’s nails digging into the table over his head and the tail that swung briefly into view was larger than it had been seconds before. is an amazing bit of show don't tell description! Perfect voices too!